concept critiques

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rouncer 103 May 23, 2013 at 16:27

is this thing too messy, i sorta didnt spend that much time on it, but god how much do people want me to slave until its ok?

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fireside 141 May 23, 2013 at 17:30

It’s so clean I can’t even see it.

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rouncer 103 May 23, 2013 at 18:15

hmm, spent more time on it. spent another hour on it, and it didnt even make a difference!!!!!
I used imageshack this time, facebook made it look like shit, but i guess its still shit.
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fireside 141 May 24, 2013 at 02:16

It works I guess, just that the theme is a bit dark and it doesn’t really seem like it has a message. Why does he have his sword out? Just for looks? There’s no enemy near.