New FPS: constructive feedback welcome!

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ShikoNiko 101 Feb 28, 2013 at 01:56 gameplay multiplayer graphics

Hello everyone,

I am an aspiring game developer who has a few good ideas, at least that’s what my peers think. I have a design frame and story for my first big idea, APEX, here it is and as mentioned in the title, constructive criticism please!

Title: APEX

Platforms: Xbox “720”, PS4, PC, “next-gen” WiiU

Summary: Jack Meyers is a NYPD SWAT lieutenant who is considered “better than the best”. One unfortunate day, while dealing with a hostage rescue, Jack is thrown into the middle of a invasion on the United States by Unknown, an Anti-American cult/ army that is comparable to the Nazis and funded by North Korea and Vietnamese communist survivors. While wandering the streets of war-torn New York, he views his squad mates die at the hands of the custom and lethal weapons of Unknown’s private army. While getting attacked he is knocked out and taken out of harms way by a group of American special forces agents who are part of the elite secret organization, APEX. Jack awakens, and after a long struggle, accepts reality and get recruited by APEX to fight against the Unknown war machine. Through a long and emotional campaign, you travel the US to fight Unknown and hopefully defeat the Unknown menace.

Multiplayer: BF3 style maps, fun game modes (not much thought put into multiplayer at this point, just some ideas)

DLC: APEX: survival similar to Bohemia’s DayZ
gun packs for mp

Thanks for reading.

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rouncer 104 Feb 28, 2013 at 12:08

sounds good so far… but where is the screenshots of in the action, then ill be able to give you more constructive feedback.

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ShikoNiko 101 Feb 28, 2013 at 15:15

@rouncer

sounds good so far… but where is the screenshots of in the action, then ill be able to give you more constructive feedback.

I don’t have any real screens of the action, because this game is still in the idea stage. If I need to post this somewhere else for that, please let me know.